Review for Domination

Domination

(#) LabRat 2012-08-25

A headpiece? Whatever happened to the all purpose collar?

She was not a virgin and while he knew that shouldn’t bother him, it did. No offense, but this part bothered me as being arrogant and stupid. Given the fact that she was a grown woman, as well as her nature, he couldn't have honestly expected her to be a virgin. For him to do so would make him either incredibly naive, or quite frankly a dick.

Another part that botherd me was the anal part. Again with her nature, he was asking a bit much. And her comment that she was saving it for him was beyond silly, since she couldn't have possibly known that he was going to be a master, that she would ever even encounter a master, or that she was going to be his pet.

Treasure seems like a mouthful for a nickname or pet name.