How the hell was this rated down?
I loved it.
It was so freaking sweet.
The entire thing was just perfect. I've never read such a perfect one-shot and one-shot's are hard to write. So to make it perfect? Talent.
Stupid Ryan's dad!
Poor Ryan.
Sweet Pete!
Just perfection.
Author's response
Thank you very much! I don't think it's all that perfect, but I'm certainly very relieved and very pleased that you seem to think so! I like sweet Petes.
Thanks for such a lovely review! :D