Never. Again. Thank. Us. For. Reading.!!!
Really, we (and I do think I can refer to "us") are all happy to read your stories, so this is a strange point of view!
concerning the story: nice, reminds me a little "D&J Show" by gucci - from the basic idea, I mean, someone discovering their identity!
I'm really fond of that idea and I'm looking forward to this story a lot! Nice start!