It's definitely original! I don't think I've ever read something where they're in an office. But here's a tip; separate the chunks of writing into paragraphs, only 4-5 lines each. It makes it much easier to read.
Otherwise, very good job if this is your first story, keep it up! I'll be waiting to read the rest :)
BleedingValentine xx
Author's response
Thank you!
Ah, that's a good idea. I shall definitely do that on the next chapter :)
Thanks heaps for reading and reviewing!
xx