Review for An Unconventional Office Romance

An Unconventional Office Romance

(#) BleedingValentine 2012-08-28

It's definitely original! I don't think I've ever read something where they're in an office. But here's a tip; separate the chunks of writing into paragraphs, only 4-5 lines each. It makes it much easier to read.

Otherwise, very good job if this is your first story, keep it up! I'll be waiting to read the rest :)

BleedingValentine xx

Author's response

Thank you!
Ah, that's a good idea. I shall definitely do that on the next chapter :)

Thanks heaps for reading and reviewing!
xx