Hey!
Sorry for not leaving a review before, I've only just gotten around to reading it with moving and everything. But I'm really enjoying it, and it's amazing the way it is, there's really no need to re-write it in my opinion. It is ultimately up to you, but please don't stop writing it :)
It would be a real shame to stop in the middle of such a good story!
Can't wait for the next chapter! xox