I have got to say that your fic's okay so far, Its headed in sort of the right direction. I mean i had trouble beleiving tonks got over the rape so quick but hey in don't think the agnst would have fit the story. I hope you don't take this story into the weasley granger tritory or too far into sytheryn kids with plans to rule the world. Aside from that the fights are pretty good with pretty good charaterization. So keep up the good work.
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Author's response
Like I made Harry say, "I'm no good in psychology." Besides that part was not witnessed through her eyes, so we don't know exactly what she was thinking. And remember, she was unconscious when she got raped. Anyway, thanks for the review! Random Shinobi