I am one of those appalling readers who rarely review (in fact I think this is the second review I have ever written). Yes, I know, I am a bad person.
I always measure fiction against two questions:
1) Do I care about the characters enough to keep reading?
2) Do I have enough interest in the plot to see it through to the end?
When it comes to this story, the answer to both is a big YES!! This story is, quite frankly, awesome and I would love to see you continue it.
Also, just to drive my point home, I obviously felt strongly enough about this to review so yeah. Besides, I'd totally turn this story into a graphic novel if I could!
Author's response
Wow, I'm really flattered you thought this story was worth reviewing, thank you! I'm glad you like it, and thanks for giving your thoughts on whether I should continue or not :D