Suspense.
Cue the jaws theme song!
I wonder what "she's" gonna type, -wink wink-
The more I type at odd hours of the morning the weirder I get.
Have I told you you're amazing? Oh, well I'll keep saying it till its no longer true. You're amazing. Loving the re-write.
Usually I get this 'oh, serious deja vu' moment when reading re-writes. But I didn't skip over anything. It was like that first time (cue Destery and Nathan with the 'Thats what she said!').
This was a really good re-write though :). Anywho.... You're amazing -she whispered NONcreepily- Nope. Not creepy at all.
Author's response
Haha, I'm glad you liked it! And I'm glad you think I'm amazing. :)