Meh. I dunno, I find this really boring. Way too many super-powered OC's.
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Way too many super-powered OC's? There is only one OC that one could call super-powered, and he gots himself killed pretty soon. And the fact that he got himself killed tells us that he wasn't super-powered after all. But yes, the first chapters are slightly boring. It takes some time to lay the foundations. Random Shinobi