What an amazing chapter! The characters are flawless, and I really love the pace with the little "almost" actions, tiny smiles and mumbled words. I used to like Ocean in the first few chapters, but as Frank got closer to Gerard, Ocean got so distant. I think Ocean has a lot in common with Robbie [ insert fangirly squeal ] from ToB, except Robbie's rebellious attitude is very intriguing and attractive, Ocean's is just too "in your face" and annoying sometimes. Wow that was completely irrelevant, sorry for the rant ^^" Anyways, I love this chapter and the story, and the song! As soon as I read the first line, I knew it was written by you [ duh! ], you have such an unmistakably unique style! Amazing job xo