Review for Personalised stories anyone?

Personalised stories anyone?

(#) atomickilljoy 2012-09-08

If it's too late, ignore this
If not, continue XD

Name: Jennifer Flores
Nickname: Jen. She hates being called Jenny
Appearance: light brown skin, black hair up to shoulders, wide brown eyes, 5'4
Personality: Very smart, silly, makes sexual jokes, and is just happy.
Likes: Zombie stuff, Rock music, comfortable clothes
Dislikes/fears: clowns, being alone in the dark

What do you want the story to be about?: Jennifer and Bob have known each other for a long time. They are the best of friends. When Bob gets a girlfriend and starts acting like a dick to her, she can't take the fact that she lost her only friend and has no one else, and sees no point in staying. She graduates early (a fucking genius is what it takes to do that) and is on the first train out of there. Time passes and she's famous, in a rock band(only the lead singer and writer. Doesn't play instruments) , and loves life, yet never got over Bob. Her and her band meet My Chem one day, and she sees Bob. He acts like a dick to her, but the rest of the band loves her and her band. They all hang out and Bob gets jealous when he sees her and Gerard bonding over comics. He confronts Jennifer, and he askes her why she ran away. She tells him. He confesses his love for her(the reason he got a girlfriend was to make her jealous, and acted like a dick in order to hide his feelings, thinking she didn't like her back) . She confesses she's always loved him. They finally get together and all is well.

Her band is all male. It would be funny to see the GUYS fangirl over meeting My Chem. XD
She's Mexican American.
The whole plot is do-able since you can just time lapse some of it.
Try and fit in a small story of her tattoo while she thinks about Bob one day: her wrist tattoo says "Rage and Love" because she lives between her rage and anger towards Bob and everyone else, and her love for him. TRY it. It's ok if this little thing doesn't fit in the plot. c:
I hope you can get to mine. Thanks a ton!

Author's response

Haha. Okay, I'll do it. You're the only one I'll make an exception for though. I don't think anyone's asked for a Bob one yet. XD xx