Review for Wrong Number

Wrong Number

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-09-10

HOLY FUCK!

WEJAODBWUQODHYWVQLSODH WIALQKCBRVDB!

WHY DO YOU ALWAYS LEAVE ME INCOHERENT, WOMAN?! I swear, it's a talent of yours.

JON KILLED HIS DAD! But I still love him.... And I'm glad Christian's still there. I would literally pull a full on spazz attack (coughs and looks around awkwardly Unlike the one I'm having now.) if she left him.

Seriously, just-

GAH!!

No words. :3

Can't wait for next part. :D

Author's response

Haha, I had to make this chapter fairly interesting because the next one is kind of a snooze-fest of cliche feeling-ness. I have to balance it out a little, I think.

I know! I couldn't have that happen. It wouldn't be in character for either of them, from how I've tried to write them.

I've got much more planned for this story, so hopefully more great reviews like this will happen lol. The next part will be a little boring as things clear up for a bit though.

:P Thanks!