It is short. 666 words actually. I like it though :). I think at the end note you meant Prologue, not Epilogue. Than again, maybe you did. Like starting with the ending and in the actual story you work up to the end which is that piece. But I'm pretty sure you meant Prologue. Oh and helpful tip, add spaces between paragraphs, it makes it easier to read.
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Geesus, I wanted to leave a good review and not an actually 'review'. Sorry, hope it didn't come across mean. Just trying to help, you may ignore it if I sound like a bitch. I really do like this though.
Author's response
hey,
thankyou for reviewing my story!!! It really helped, the main reason I stated this, was so I could get better at writting!!!! im going to fix my story right now. :P