Review for Motorcycle

Motorcycle

(#) jules3677 2012-09-12

Well I liked the plot of the first six chapters. Especially impressed with how Harry escaped from his relatives. Laughed at how he defeated a bikie. Was impressed that Drs' Granger allowed their school age daughter to go travelling around Europe with a school age male (whom they had never met), but hey this is fiction, lots of things happen which wouldn't in RL. Quite liked how you dealt with the curses & how they gained knowledge. I note that this story is quite old & has not been updated, this is a disappointment as I was looking forward to reading how you resolved all the foreseeable problems (plus the Grangers' discovering their minor daughter eloped). Nevermind, your story did have potential.