ASSHOLE FRANK FTW!!!
Ah, I like it a lot. Interesting characters and the bits in italics are really cool and realistic. Also the dialogue is great. Me like a lot.
I saw some douche had rated this down so now I'm pissed off and flaming random trolls.
SF
Author's response
Asshole Frank is best Frank!
Thank you so much! I felt I was going a bit overboard with that italics on this one so I just labelled it a prologue and hoped that would do .
Glad you're enjoying it, hooon
I was raging for a while IT WAS GREEN YA JACKASS :C
Whatevs it's still green in my heart