I'm intrigues by the new characters at the end of this chapter....
Nice writing again, it was good you explained where all the characters where at emotionally after everything had happened, would love a bit more between Belle and Patrick, you know it's a timebomb.....
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Author's response
Elise is love. i was going to just start a whole new story for her, because i love her character. i probably should have just started a new story for her, but i really don't have time to write another story right now, so i'm just going to elaborate on this one until the end, which is no where in sight right now. i'm a sucker for sequels too, so this is probably going to be a neverending story. man, i love that movie.
i've got something brewing for belle and patrick. Hopefully I can fit that into the next chapter.
and have i told you lately that i love your reviews? 'cause i do...