Nice work, i loved you described the emotion and the world between life and death. Very touching... I never cry when reading stories, only time I've ever cried was during the movie 'Titanic'... WHA! So you should give yourself a pat on the back for tearing at my heartstrings. Nice work. -Nuuoa Eclaire
Author's response
i made you cry? no way! i'm so proud of myself..lol, just jk.