Review for With my Last Breath [edited]

With my Last Breath [edited]

(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-11-06

Nice work, i loved you described the emotion and the world between life and death. Very touching... I never cry when reading stories, only time I've ever cried was during the movie 'Titanic'... WHA! So you should give yourself a pat on the back for tearing at my heartstrings. Nice work. -Nuuoa Eclaire

Author's response

i made you cry? no way! i'm so proud of myself..lol, just jk.