I like it. I love how it's dark, and yet it really makes you think and question some things. It has that last one-liner that makes you either smile or get chills. Just the kind of piece I like to read, and I'm sure others will like it too.
Author's response
Thank you very much. I'm really, really glad that you liked it and that the last line seems to have had the desired effect.
Thanks for reviewing! :D