Not bad so far. I'd like to see a little more of her as a person and a little less as a trainer, if you follow. If not, feel free to contact me via e-mail and I'll explain.
Author\'s Response: Thank you for the review. I think I follow what you mean, I have been focusing overly on my character as a trainer than her as herself. I've been adding the quirks of her personality, but I guess that's not enough. Still this is a learning experience I think I'll start adapting my story in the next couple of chapters. We'll see how it goes. TBH I've been ill the last few days, this reviews given me something to think about to get this story going again. I should thank you really :D.