FicWad

Hi, You know (i know you might have heard this heaps at DLP.net) this story was really good before you got ginny involved in it. I say you could have kept her powerful and all that shit but training her?? I won't go on about how much I hate the slut but its just illogical to have her trained when he needs to learn heaps more by the sounds of it. Though having her powerful is one thing but also having her nearly beat harry undermines the fact he's trained for most of his life and judging from it she's only had four years of possible practice without any guidence.
Anyways to sum the whole story up though (before hogwarts) it was really good the battle scenes were highly entertaining and somewhat realistic considering they were his first real fights outside training. I liked how you didn't write this as Harry vs the world sort of thing and your takes on the make up of the magic world kept it fresh. And the whole inner struggle with killing and no angst to follow was a pretty good side conflict.

It was a good story over all, I don't know about following the sequel with the whole Ginny thing though.

thanks

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(p.s. Good work with uncle slayer)