okay let me be the first to say welcome to ficwad. we are crazy people, and you are probably going to get an insane offer from somebody, offering to make babies with you. don't be afraid, it's a compliment. at least i think it is.
anyway, this was very well written. the dialog used was fairly realistic, and i enjoy her sense of humor and overall personality.
oh, and italics is the following (minus the spaces)
< i > insert words that you want italicized here < / i > and if you want bold you do the same thing except substitute a “b” for the “i”
if you have any other questions, you can I.M. me or contact me on here. good luck with the story, although i doubt you'll need it. i'm lovin' it so far
Author's response
Ah, I knew the italics had something to do with an i and some bracket things, but I forgot exactly how it went. My attempts ended in everything being in italics. Thank you sooo much, I officially owe you my firstborn.