Review for Part Time Lover

Part Time Lover

(#) Mirazal 2012-10-07

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I'm smiling so hard right now.

This was really good. In the beginning, when Taylor was talking about her "manufactured" life, and how nothing was really real but her tears.... DAMN. THAT IS FUCKING EXCELLENT.

And the tampon bit was funny. It reminded me of when I go to the grocery store with my dad and he shoves me in that aisle, tells me to get whatever I need, then he runs away. :)

Thanks for updating! Update soon please!

Author's response

:P
Love super smiles!

I'm glad you paid attention to that! That's all of Taylor right there, her character. She realizes now that she's worked so hard for absolutely nothing, and from here Frank kind of teaches her that. That's a big part of the story.

Haha. Yeah. I have so many funny stories with that aisle. Gotta love it!

Thank you!