I like the new characters! It keeps the story rolling. I marvel at the way Belle's bitchiness has just turned way more potent after all the shit that has happened. Very real life. Keep going! It's great.
Author's response
i am in love with my new characters. i want to get more in depth with elise's, but i don't want to neglect belle's character. i really am kicking myself in the ass for not writing a new story for elise.
yes, everyone is angry with belle right now. i've been formulating the next chapter in my mind, and i think i'm going to do it all in patrick's POV. I always seem to write dirty when i write in his POV though... so expect secks...