Okay WOW. wow.I LOVE it!! I was sat reading this at school and some girl was sat next to me and it was awkward as hell when I started laughing hysterically but it was worth it. Awesome! Please please update the next bit soon :3
xo
Author's response
Ask her if she enjoys my gay literary porn for me, would you?
Seriously though, glad you enjoyed it the second part will be up once I've written it!