A lot was going on in this chapter, you wrote Elise's character in well and I didn't like her at first and I think she gave up way too easy when Belle taunted her.
The combo of Allison, Belle and Elise could be interesting and I love the fact she's not perfect.
I love imperfection.
Author's response
it wasn't so much that she gave up, as it was that she just didn't really care to pick a fight with belle for a number of reasons. she knew belle for a while, and she knows how overdramatic she was and still is. she also knows that had she reacted the way she wanted to she could be messing with her best friend's (allison's) career. the company may not mean a lot to elise, but the company means a lot to allison.
ha, it's funny you should mention the three of them... because they are about to get a lot closer.
your reviews kind of give me a chance to explain why i did what. you are pretty amazing for giving me an opportunity to do that