Genius, for sure.
I love this! Wow... it's so crazy, but wonderful. I can sympathize to an extent with them. Poor Gerard. His daughter is horrible, but sometimes teenagers are when it comes to their parents. And Julie? I didn't get it. She seemed to like him? But she got him fired. That part was odd.
And he's dying?!? That's so SAD! Is he going to tell Frank? My god. That's probably the worst part lol, not the killing but the fact that he's dying!
And Frank is SO adorable. He's so funny.
I loved the part where Gerard said he ate meat, and Frank looked appalled lol. That was awesome.
Overall this was just awesome. So much awesome-ness and the slight domination thing is sexy as hell.
5/5 lady, because this is wonderful in every single possible way.
Author's response
Oh my god!
Thank you so much! Every review on this story has seriously rocked, like I can't thank you enough.
Oh and Julie is one of those manipulating bitches that like to lead men on just so that they can call them perves when they actually take an interest. You will meet many of her kind in life.
Yeah the daughter kind of sucks, that's why i don't wan to use Bandit because she's the most adorable little thing.
Frank's a preppy little spitfire, for sure.
Thanks again, i'm so glad you're enjoying it!