Since you were so kind to review my story, I thought I'd return the favor. I read this whole thing during Verbal Communications and my lunch break and I may say: O-face, much? I'm a drama whore and I was quite satisfied. Amazing. You have quite a way with words, so don't worry about having to step up your game. :)
Author's response
i read almost everything under the FOB category. and when i read, i review. really, don't feel obligated to review my stuff if you're not feeling it. i use the "review" section for constructive criticism, mainly to build on myself as a writer. but I suppose I shouldn’t complain if you want to tell me i’m doing something right :)
i'm in the same boat. as if my life isn't dramatic enough, i find myself not only reading drama, but writing it as well.
thank you for the compliment,coming from someone that writes like you do... "you have a way with words" means a lot.(my writing is elementary in comparison to yours)
again, thanks for taking the time to read.