Review for 23 GBP

23 GBP

(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-11

Amusing. Believable OC and Mr. Dursley is IC.

Grammar etc:

No big problems in here. Certainly nothing that got in the way of the story.

The N in "Number Four, Privet Drive" is usually capitalized.

"purple faced" should be "purple-faced."

"Never mind" is two words. "Altogether" is one word in this case. "Self-appointed" is a hyphenated word.