Review for Airplanes

Airplanes

(#) Mirazal 2012-10-24

They're gonna have sex, aren't they.
They will. I can feel it.

Wow Ryan you STUCK UP PRETENTIOUS ASSHOLE! That was funny, though. You write douchebag!Ryan well.

I like Juliet. Her character seems real, and her reactions to whatever mind tricks Ryan's pullling are perfect.

This was a really great chapter... it continued to introduce the characters really well.

Okay. Um. So last night I was having a Panic! craze and I was watching clips of them on YouTube, when I stumbled across their Live In Denver DVD. I didn't know what it was, so I watched it, and OMFG THEY ARE SO GOOD LIVE ASGFGJLSKDHSGSKD

RYAN WAS SO BEAUTIFUL, I CRIED. I CRIED. HE GOT TO SING BACKUP AND I SWEAR HIS VOICE DRIFTED DOWN FROM HEAVEN. AND HIS HAIR, SERIOUSLY IT WAS CRAFTED BY ANGELS

AND HE WAS SINGING ASDFGHJKKL;SHAK

So I looked up some stuff by The Young Veins, even though I'd sworn loyalty to Panic!... omg, Dangerous Blues is such a good song. It sounds like Ryan Ross singing a Beatles song, which trust me, is the most perfect gift to man ever.

That said..... update soon please! -grins sheepishly- (Sorry, I had to tell everyone about Ryan Ross. I told my friends at school, and they all though I was gonna die because I was hyperventilating and hysterical.)

Author's response

lol, I can't answer that. Don't sound TOO bummed. =/

Hahaha, why thank you!

Thanks. I'm really glad. It's kind of different territory for me. Writing Ryan is a little difficult. I'm never sure if what I write comes out right though.

YES! YES THEY ARE! I MISS RYAN AND JON!
I'll check that song out but I didn't really like their stuff when I looked it up a while ago. =/ It just wasn't my thing, but I'm not a huge Beatles fan. It's too smooth and mellow for me.

I'll try! :D I understand lol.