“Yes, Bob I fucking care, I care a whole lot this isn’t easy but it doesn’t have to be this difficult! I’m going, we’re not getting back together and my shoes don’t fit in my fucking case” LOL I laughed at this part. Him complaining about his shoes not fitting was so random that you kinda forget for a second that he's about to break someones heart forever.
I rather enjoyed this. It pulls at your heartstrings and makes you scream on the inside hoping that Frank will stay, but you know he's too stubborn and won't.
Great job!
-Sara
Author's response
Thank you! It comes from the stress head I gain when tyrying to pack.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!