Review for Tramps like us

Tramps like us

(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-10-26

Man this makes me want to write a one shot using this as the base really bad.

Then again, it hits me that I think everything has been conveyed perfectly in the poem and I would just be trying to get something across that is abstract with my words.

Maybe what you're talking about can only be understood in the abstract of the mind.

It was lovely.

-Adnarim Smada

Author's response

Thank you! :D

I am so flattered by this, you don't even know. I was like, wow, and then I was like, really?! And now I'm just curious, so if you still feel like doing something with this as a base, feel free :) (As long as you show me the eventual results, man. That's like, mandatory)

Again, thank you so much :)