This was really good. I get what you mean when you said you just wanted to write, that's what I usually do; writing's an outlet for the things we can't say. I love this for so many reasons: I love the way I keep coming up with ideas for who the people may be, and then it could be any of them! I love the way you wrote it; these stories make me happy, because I know there's still good writers out there. (yes, I stole that off one of the reviews for one of my stories but it sums up perfectly what I'm trying to say.) I love the way anything could be a metaphor, it's like the names- there are so many options as to what they could be. I especially love the fact that it's deep, and quite deppressing. For me, this sort of thing is the best. It helps me feel better, you know? But you're an awesome writer and I'll be checking out some of your other stuff now, that is, if you have any... ;-D