Please continue, if it's not too much bother with all your other stories.
I liked this, very well written, although I feel guilty for laughing when you said Ray's head looked like a toilet brush...
I like the Gerbert pairing, although I don't actually picture Gerard and Bert. I picture the names, but the faces in my head have nothing to do with the actual, real life men :)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully you'll be picturing the character's (mine are probably pretty different to the real guys)as the story goes on xD