Good story but with one bad side all the plot always go in Harry's favors it will be more interesting if a few things will go against him ( butterfly effect ) ex: that Voldemort survive in his "meeting" withe Harry.
Despit this little critic I like your fics. Good work
A french reader.
PS: I know that this is a H/Hr fic but like Sirius I think that Hr/H/Luna will be better ( I like luna and think that she eserve to be Happy with Harry and that Hermione is openminded enough to accept Luna and be in a "ménage à trois")