A bit of advice. Putting things like: "there another chapter are you happy" and "sorry first fanfic and i suck at summaries and spelling" in your summary isn't going to attract as many readers as something more possitive. Also, try using proper capitalization in your summary. Think of your summary as a job interview. If you go to a interview looking unprofessional you won't be hired. A badly worded summary is not going to get your stories read. Good luck in your future writing!
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are you the one that is rating my stories so they cant be shown cuz thats rude