Review for Personal Oneshots, Anyone? ;)

Personal Oneshots, Anyone? ;)

(#) Mrs-Ross_Urie 2012-11-05

Plot:Oh jeez idk, uhmm,he and Brendon, his best friend, comes to my house when I first move to town to greet us, and it was like love at first sight and all that gooeyness;)and we end up together and Brendon turns out my best friend too;)
Pairing:Stacey and Ryan
(If O/C)
Name;Stacey Picardel
Nicknames;Stace, Nay, Little Red from the hood;D, Renee,Picarsmell;3
Looks;
Hair;Dark Brown with Blond highlights, collar bone length, which is long in the front and gets shorter in the back.
Eyes;Dark Brown
Height/weight;117 lbs, 5"4 (ik i'm really short)
Anything else to do with looks;Mexican American-Light brown skin, always has bright color nail polish on,
Clothes;Colored skinny jeans, big hoodies,Aeropostale, American Eagle, DC Shoes, Vans,Moccasins, diff earrings for every outfit, those thich rubber bracelets that say Justin Bieber, Weezy, Love, And Party Animal on the right hand, and random cool little bracelets on the left.I REALLY Love clothes and accesories;)
Personality;Absolutely Hilarious and outgoing,always making people laugh, Kind of a good girl in school,alwayas getting work done and Extra Credit, but once you make her mad she snaps, has a little attitude, always gets what she wants, loyal in relationships and to her best friend,
Anything else?Plays Softball and basketball and Volleyball, Plays Acoustic guitar, piano, saxophone, violin, and is really amazing at singing. Jobs; Tutoring, Babysitting, and a waitress.



Second story:
Same exact information above, but as Stacey and Brendon as a couple and A new plot, like where Stacey has to tutor the bad boy Brendon, and she realizes she has a huge crush on him, and he actually starts to change for her.


You Should make these stories way longer than a oneshots, some of them sound really amazing;) and if you have fun writing them than keep going