Well, that escalated quickly. I think I mostly liked it. The ending did take me out of it a little bit though. Seems like that might be taking the feminist sensibilities a bit far (men=evil). Though, I'm a man and I did just get done reading what is basically harem porn, so maybe you have a point there. On a side note, God seems to be a bit of a prick. I'm an atheist though, so that fits my view of a "God" pretty well actually. In any event, I was entertained even if the mindless fun of the story got a little goofy at the end.