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Toph's Nightmares
Toph's Nightmares
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DuskAdo1
2012-11-13
Eh...I'm not at all sure that Xin Fu and Yu would just take his word for ti and walk away. Blah. This needs a bit of work, and check your paragraph spacing. Put a blank line between paragraphs for ease of reading.