Okay, so, I was slightly confused by Ryan's sudden appearance at the school, but other that that... whoa, just so emotional and so much hurt and ugh.... It gave me a shiver. That's pretty good.
Anyway. Please fix it. Like, now. :( (BUT! I just realised that there's another chapter that I need to read after this!!! fistpump) Expect another review from me shortly. ;)
Author's response
Yeah, he was skipping with Brendon and just went to school to pick up Spencer and Marie. I didn't really explain that too well. Oops!
There are a lot of emotions. I'm having a hard time balancing it out with their ages, so I'm trying to throw a little more immaturity in and mixed emotions, 'cause I swear that's all I felt senior year of high school!
O.o I'm trying! :P Haha. Thank you!