Review for The story of me

The story of me

(#) ColorfulShadow 2012-11-16

Damn. I am no good at advice.

If you've read my old story. Little Trouble Makers, the main character doesn't even know the real meaning for babysitting.

The best advice I can give you:

No bad language

Be entertaining

And don't actually sit on the kid :3

And if this kid is flirty, play along. He's a kid :D

Author's response

Yeah, I wouldn't swear, I don't know why I'd sit on him... I'll do a mickey mouse impression