Okay, first off, I'd like to thank you for the massive review you left me, it was very thoughtful, so I shall return the favour :)
I'm newish to Homestuck (act 2 n00000b..) but my friend Chloe gloms on and on about it and I pretty much know the entire plot and such (I really should catch up though...but...laziness..anyways.)
Let's stop rambling about me, I absolutely adore this story. You've embodied the style and creativity of Homestuck and I was laughing throughout the whole thing. Please continue writing this, I'd love to read more.
The only things wrong with it I can see is that if someone were to be unfamiliar with the insanity that is Homestuck, they'd probably be quite confused. (At least I would be, but I'm a dim bulb in a bright room, okay that made no sense I'll stop talking forever now =_=)
Author's response
I'm not writing about Homestuck asomuch as writing about the Homestuck Fandom.
I have so much planning and forethought in this monster. There is symbolism everywhere. I AM AN AUTHOR BECAUSE I USE SYMBOLISM, BECAUSE SYMBOLISM IS TOTALLY NOT A HUGE JOKE IN THE WRITING COMMUNITY.
And you're welcome for that massive review. And this thing will hopefully take over the internet. There will be side stories on different sites, and video links, and picture links. This will be huge.