Review for Personalized stories?

Personalized stories?

(#) kissmeifucan97 2012-11-25

-FORM IF YOU WANT YOUR STORY TO INVOLVE AN OC-

Fandom/Category:(MCR/P!ATD/A TV show/Movie/etc.):P!ATD

Name:Elizabeth. McNally (goes by Ellie)

Age:22

Height/Weight:5'6|120lbs

Looks:long straight red hair with full fringe. Really brightemerald green eyes that are almost unnaturaly bright.pale skin,and has a angel wing tattoo in her right wrist

Clothing:a long purple fit a flar gown it has a black over lace and is strapless. A black ribbin is around the waist and falls down the front of the dress tho the floor. A a pair of black pumps and a black lace mascaraed mask in the shape of a cat with a purple under tone

Personality:very quiet and shy. Stays away from big crowds, when you get to know her she is funny silly and creative. Her passion is her violin. has had her heart broken way to many times so is tired of when guys hit on. Easy to be be around and will never make the first move

Likes/Dislikes:love voilin and all music. Horror stories and movies. Motorcycles, and making referenceshates it when peolpe complement her music and they don't know what they are talking about.and hates when people call her Elizabeth or beth

Very brief yet descriptive background story on the character: Ellie is a in a small orcastra that is playing at a event in a huge abandon mansion. She is shy and wants to go home but when the host (pete wentz) invites the whole band to stay at party for the rest of the night she is convinced to stay.

Plot: Brendon is forced to go to some party the pete is throwing. He is having a terrible night and doent want to be there. What he doesn't expect is seein a beutiful girl in the orcastra he remeber her angel wing tattoo on her wrist but never seems to find her after the preformance.

Email address: kissmeifucan10@gmail.com

Author's response

Good morning love!

I know the bands (trust me) but I don't know their personalities. I guess I could watch and interview or two to get the gist, but be warned they may be portrayed as OOC.

Have a wonderful day :3