Review for Personalized stories?

Personalized stories?

(#) Mcrroxursox45 2012-11-25

Hi 'dere!

Fandom/Category(MCR/P!ATD/A TV show/Movie/etc.): MyChem

Name:Tiara

Age: 16

Height/Weight: 5'9" 145

Looks: http://images.sodahead.com/profiles/0/0/2/4/1/4/5/5/7/Lalalala-93815580925.jpeg
http://images.sodahead.com/profiles/0/0/2/4/1/4/5/5/7/Lalalala-93815653607.jpeg
http://images.sodahead.com/profiles/0/0/2/4/1/4/5/5/7/Just-bein-me-93263069516.jpeg

Clothing (just the clothing you'd need for your story. Like, if it's supposed to take place at a fancy event just write down what your OC would wear for evening wear):Cute casual-dressy clothes

Personality: Eh... Nice to an extent. Can be bitchy under the right circumstances. Hopeless romantic.

Likes/Dislikes: Likes making people happy, baking, the color pink, glitter, doing makeup. Dislikes: Drama, gross stuff, bugs

Very brief yet descriptive background story on the character: She is 16, she has no siblings, and her parents are rarely home from working so much. She's loaded, and sometimes comes off as a bitch because of it. She doesn't have many friends since most of them use her, but her and Gerard have been friends for 1 year.

Plot: While Gerard is at Tiara's house, he brings his brother Mikey. Tiara and Mikey hit it off, and flirt a lot. Gerard gets upset and goes home, but Mikey stays the night. They decide to go on a date, and have a great time.

Fast forward 10 months.

They break up because Mikey treats her horribly, and Gerard comes over to comfort her. While he's there they admit their feelings for each other (No 'I love you's, ok?), but agree to hold off on a relationship until she's over Mikey.

Email address (so I can tell you when it's done, we can compromise on a length, fandom, etc.): awaywiththeboysintheband@ymail.com