Review for For People I Adopted

For People I Adopted

(#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-12-04

YEAH UM FUCK IT, ASH, ANDY, BRENDON, FINLAY AND VALERIE ARE JOINING IN BABY

Name: Ashlie "Ash" Harlequin Shadlow
Age: 16
Looks: Originally pale-blonde hair, now dyed black and cut to her jawline in a straight bob. Has white streaks running throughout. Tall and skinny. Hazel eyes.
Personality: Scared, shy, grumpy, angry, pissed off, murderous, sweet round Andy and Fin, and Jatt (looks at Sam pointedly)
Anything Else?: NAHHHH MAN

Name: Andy Jacob Shadlow
Age: 18
Looks: Kinda like a teenage Andy Biersack. Long-ish black hair, bright blue eyes, snakebites, tall.
Personality: Cheeky, funny, loves Fin with all his heart, tends to shy away from cameras.
Anything Else?: He dislikes cameras.

Name: Finlay Anderson
Age: 19
Looks: Back-combed black hair, one eye is almost whit and the other is olive green. Pale, medium height.
Personality: Shy. Very shy, really only talks to Andy and Ash.
Anything Else?: Nah.

Name: Valerie Laura Mottborough
Age: 15
Looks: Long, bright pink hair. Goes to her hips. Has black and white streaks through it, and blue tips. Bright blue eyes. Spiderbites on the right side of her bottom lip.
Personality: Bubbly, sweet, happy-go-lucky, kinda dopey, the cutie-pie.
Anything Else?: SHE'S TOTALLY LESBO.

Name: Brendon Kurt Cobain
Age: 15
Looks: Chestnut brown hair, cut like Kellin Quinn's. Chocolate brown eyes, slight tan.
Personality: TOO GAY TO FUNCTION.
Anything Else?: HE'S GAY AND HAS HAD BUTTSEX
-calls in Ryan the pushy virgin-




Author's response

I HAVE A ONE SHOT IDEA FOR VALERIE BASED ON THE SONG VALERIE
I NEED AN OC FOR HER FIRST...