what a touching story!
I was hooked from the start to the end, even if it wasn't very long.
i have no idea how to explain it, but something about this story just kept me fixed onto the screen :P
poor girl, i couldn't imagin how that felt being used like that, however your story made it clear to me. Perhaps because it is in first person i could relate to the character better.
but that's enother story
oh sorry for my rant, i really liked this story, keep up the good work! i hope to see some more of your work.
Author's response
Thank you Sakura, I'm glad you liked it! Hope it didn't freak ya out too much...never thought it would be your sort of thing...anyway, thanks for reviewing!