-I liked this story very much.It was well written,well thought,I could see the scene happening before my eyes.I also liked the way the characters,particularly naruto was portrayed as older,wiser,and the fact that everything held together .There's also the implied sasu x naruto thing that added to the atmosphere.And the attention to their reactions was good too,that is something that many author don't put focus on.The characters were able to speak without speaking,the actions spoke louder than the words.