I haven't read a killjoy story this good in a long time.
Wow, this was amazing. If you think about it, Danger Days is just as dark (if not darker) than MCR's other albums, and you captured that idea really well.
(I also admire your use of 2nd person POV. That's hard to write, personally.)
I really liled this. :)
Author's response
thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
it is, of course, not finished, so I hope you'll like the continuation as well