I like how you let the reader know that Cheese thinks Chris is actually being a "nice guy" (even though it´s plain to see he´s really a prick - I mean what kind of jerk doesn´t know "Nightmare before Christmas"? ;) )
God, I can´t believe she lets him do that to her. Poor gal. Oh well... How old are they supposed to be? (Just wondering is all.)
Author's response
i only 16 so dats da only reference to "secks" u can expect in dis lol