Ugh! You are genius, this was articulate and the dialogue was exquisite.
First, I am in love with Belle FINALLY giving Dr Sihn snippits of what was going on and how you developed this release through the chapter. Really really great.
Secondly, Patrick in the studio was great, I really caught his feelings and his passion for music and then with Greta at the end....it was beautiful.
You really are something, and this is filled with even more gratitude as I@ve had half a bottle of EXPENSIVE wine tonight and not the cheap stuff so I'm totally half cut.
But I love you still. seriously. Look at my face. I'm not joking.
Author's response
the “Patrick in the studio” scene was very unique to write. i was thinking about how there are so many stories with scenes from either Pete writing the lyrics, or FOB performing/playing, but never them in the studio. i dunno, i was fascinated with it. oh, and i originally posted this chapter without any of the lyrics to "carpal tunnel of love", and i should have put a footnote as to the content in those lyrics, because i'm pretty sure they are NOT accurate. or at least i hope they're not ;)
on a serious note, i'm glad you enjoy it. i was starting to write to satisfy myself and not my readers as much, so it really means a lot that you are actually enjoying this. it also makes you strange (18?) because that means we are kind of on the same wave length with this :D
and i love you too katy. /the division of joy/? ...you in?