Rating a story about video game dolphins seems silly. But, what was displayed, if taken in a certain context was done well. Creating a aculture and a mythology that flows and makes sence is difficult to do. Native peoples have thier mythogy that makes sence to them. Taking that into account then appling that to a ocean based culture would not be easy to do in my opinion. I think this was done fairly well.
Author\'s Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you think the story works as a sort of cetacean myth - that's certainly what I was going for.And thanks for the dig at my fandom, too! :D -Sparky Lurkdragon